the me you never see

[4everyours]

Ok.....I'm kind of pissed right now because I can't find any of my poems on my websites so I'm going to have to retype out every poem to put up here. Not happy...not happy at all. -_-

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AND NOW I CAN'T FIND THE BOOK I KEPT THEM ALL WRITTEN DOWN IN!! GAHH!! NOT FAIR NOT FAIR!! >.< Well here's one poem for your reading pleasure. It's alittle...sexual sounding but it's not like hardcore or anything like that. It's the only good one I can find at this time so just read it. lol.

Don't Forget to Breath

As the clothes
Fall to the floor
I see you standing
At the door

The world has stopped
My body frozen
You step to me
I've been choosen

Your tender warmth
Covers my soul
Leaving me breathless
Making me whole

Sleep is the farthest
Thing from the mind
Right now I wish
i could just stop time

Your tender voice
The sweetest words
All come together
Nothings absurd

We lay there as one
Never to leave
All I can think of
Is don't forget to breath

My heart is pounding
My mouth is dry
But nothing matters
No need to try

Our naked bodies
Bend and turn
In the intercourse
We have earned

Knowing this night
Won't last forever
Taking it slow
Making is so much better

Your eyes fall closed
And you begin to leave
As I lean over and whisper
Don't forget to breath.

[raven]

...woah, very deep, very beautiful, but, I think Nickster shall be mad...maybe you should have a look at the rules before you start posting.....sorrry ><

[Amry]

Indeed - I loved it, it was very well-written, and you set the mood perfectly... but I'm not sure the theme is quite in keeping with the rules set by the all-powerful Nickster. A shame, it was really beautiful!