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Post by Deorsa on Feb 9, 2005 19:06:37 GMT -5
ok, I decided that since some of you are trying this, it wouldn't hurt to try it myself. I've never written a real poem before so don't laugh. This poem is kinda a true story of my life and feelings so here goes.....
I have had so many homes Within this life I've lived And now I'm moving once again Oh, will this ever end?
Because I've moved so many times I've lost a lot of friends And left behind the worlds I know To start a life again.
Yet even though I've had my share Of many hurts and pains There is a reasuring thought That always will remain...
God has a new home waiting for me Where the streets are paved with gold So I will wait here paitently Until He calls me home.
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Post by DavidBruce on Feb 12, 2005 0:40:00 GMT -5
very nice good job
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Post by Alegna on Feb 15, 2005 8:21:05 GMT -5
AWEsome K
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Post by Deorsa on Feb 15, 2005 16:53:06 GMT -5
thank ya kindly ;D
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Post by Alegna on Feb 16, 2005 8:31:06 GMT -5
mah pleasure...
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