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Post by Alegna on Feb 8, 2005 10:59:16 GMT -5
ok, im really not too sure about this one.. not one of my best. but here goes anyway... Everytime i turn my back every second that im here every moment that i feel every minute that i will fear every longing that i show every secret i let go
all the times your joy showed all the nights i cried all of the ways you love all of me comes alive all of this because all of you completes everything inside
this way in which you see this hungry desperate need that feeling that you cause that makes all my loyalty yours
the power that you hold the word that could break the whisper that could heal and the life you made real
You are my all, you help me breathe, you gave me life and you, you chose to love mesome honest critcism would be appreciated
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Post by Norelia on Feb 8, 2005 12:48:45 GMT -5
I think it's nice
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Post by Alegna on Feb 15, 2005 8:19:25 GMT -5
thanks B ;D
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Post by Norelia on Feb 15, 2005 9:31:28 GMT -5
your welcome:)
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Post by Alegna on Feb 16, 2005 8:30:19 GMT -5
well thats just dandy....
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Post by Norelia on Feb 16, 2005 12:31:47 GMT -5
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Post by Nick on Feb 21, 2005 6:55:21 GMT -5
Wow...sho, very good!
"You chose to love me"
Are you speaking to the Lord? Or a guy? Or who is it directed to? j/w
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Post by Deorsa on Feb 22, 2005 15:15:25 GMT -5
ummmm, you gave me life .you are my all. I think she means God. but that's just a guess?
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Post by sydroiles on Feb 22, 2005 15:24:34 GMT -5
i'm impressed...man everyone on this site is really talented. i'm one of the fastest pizza delivery guys. haha...i'm such a loser
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Post by Alegna on Feb 22, 2005 16:01:17 GMT -5
nick- yeah it is to God..
Nate- hahha- hey thats a cool talent, and excuse ME you can play piano!!
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Post by Norelia on Feb 23, 2005 7:54:01 GMT -5
Ya helloooooo!! really! You say playing the piano is not a talent! ok, well you didn't actually say that so......never mind ummm....... Everytime all this the you.I dunno......just felt like I had to put a name in there for you for the poem since everybody else did haha! ok I'm in a weird mood
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Post by Alegna on Feb 23, 2005 9:52:00 GMT -5
LOL... haha ummm thanks britt.. i think
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Post by Norelia on Feb 23, 2005 9:54:32 GMT -5
hahahaha! your welcome :)lol
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