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Post by Amry on Jan 23, 2005 20:59:44 GMT -5
Tank oo. The rest of tbis chapter is going slowly... I'll try some more tonight. Expect more soon.
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Post by Nick on Jan 24, 2005 7:11:41 GMT -5
I await with an imitation of patience! lol. More More! WE WANT MORE OF THE MAIDEN IN THE MOON!
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Post by Amry on Jan 29, 2005 18:59:29 GMT -5
Okay, I have just read Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven." and no more of The Maiden in the Moon will be written or posted until everyone who reviews this thread (Nick, Mike McCarver, Christina, you know who you are) have read it and proven they have read it by quoting a line from it and giving their opinion. Because I dunno how I got by thinking my poetry was decent when a man like this wrote so much better. I don't even know how I thought about writing this "poetry" when his can still be read.
I'm serious about that, though. Quote and review "The Raven" or you will never know what happens to the Maiden and Ruun. It's only a few pages long. Oh yes, and when reading it say it out loud. That's the only way to do it.
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Post by Kimnas on Feb 1, 2005 7:20:55 GMT -5
"Quothe the Raven Nevermore" Edgar Allen Poe is one of my favorite writers. Although I have never read The Raven. I have read one of his works...which I cannot remember the name, but I was captivated by it. Also, remember, some people are given a talen for writing which lifts them to a different level of writing. You are very good! Awesome, in fact and I would definately consider your writing as poetry
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Post by Amry on Feb 1, 2005 18:44:26 GMT -5
Aw, thank you. I was a bit overwhelmed by it a few days ago... still am, but thinking sanely now. More tomorrow. I'm still having trouble with this one stanza. Grr.
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Post by Amry on Mar 22, 2005 18:26:53 GMT -5
YES, I know "tomorrow" does not equal a month and a half! But it's really screwed up... I am SO gonna need to edit, it sounds absolutely horrible. But, know: there are 2 and 1/2 more stanzas done.
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