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Post by Kimnas on Nov 23, 2005 13:31:23 GMT -5
((Awesome!! Shveet! Oh, I'm pumped lol. Okay, Raven, I think you can call Lucas his name when you are referring to him in action [or else it might get entirely too confusing] but Jerry doesn't know his name because Lucas has not said it yet. So, until he does, Jerry probably shouldn't use his name when speaking...or yelling. Norelia, you might wanna be careful on using the king because he is my charry *smiles*. I mean like...some people get really annoyed when you use their character like when you speak with their character or use their character in certain detailed actions. The main reason being that you could change the way that others and you see the character's personality and plus, every RPer needs his say in the story, but it's fine for now, just might wanna be careful. For instance, the king, I had pictured as a more jolly, but stern fellow, not a push-over. So, instead of just giving up trying to argue, he'd send some guards with her, or after her to make sure she stayed safe, if you get what I mean. No worries though. Enough talk, ONTO THE RP!)) Lucas' heart stopped for a moment when the pan slammed up against the wall right in front of him. Not stopping for breath, Lucas, pulled down the chairs that he passed so as to make it harder for the...thing. Thinking that the nearest cupboard was actually another room, Lucas sidestepped into the closet and met the coat rack in a very personal way. After shaking it off, he stepped back out to realize his oppressor close on his heels. Dashing through the nearest door, Lucas advanced to the next stage.((Sorry it's so short, I don't have time currently to write a seminar bbs.))
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Post by Norelia on Nov 23, 2005 15:07:41 GMT -5
((sorry I'll try not to do that in the future. I get carried away sometimes If you want we can errase that part and you can post about him after this? or something of that sort to make him more jolly and stern?? change it in any way that you want ))
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Post by raven on Nov 24, 2005 10:27:51 GMT -5
((Tis okay. I can't wait to see what happens!!))
Jerry nearly laughed as the male tumbled out of the cubard and onto the dinning room door, " Come on kid, Just give it up, I've got a-" Jerry froze.'Ah crap, he thought, The kid...where'd she go?!' Then he looked over at the victum he had so wanted to crush."You little punk! Where'd the girl go?!"
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Post by Kimnas on Dec 13, 2005 9:30:02 GMT -5
Lucas thought to himself, 'hmmm...if he thinks I have her...hate to disappoint him, eh? heh heh heh.' Standing up to his full height (which wasn't much to speak of) he brushed off the dirt of his shoulder and said.
"You can't have her. I warned you before, but you had to pick a fight with me. You have failed your mission, so you m-might just want to go back to your leader with your discouraging news. Failure!"
Lucas tried to hold his fear back, but one stutter came through, he hoped earnestly that the creature didn't notice it. Looking down slightly, he saw a glass of water simply sitting in wait to be thrown on the table. Very swiftly, he grabbed the glass and chucked it at the beast. Then he ran through the door behind him to try and escape...
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Post by raven on Dec 22, 2005 18:59:23 GMT -5
((Okay, I'm updating for Marith and Jerry. Jerry first. I'm really....waiiiiit....mehehehe. ^_______^ Marith can wait. I don't even know If I'm allowed to do this. Oh well. Oh yea, I sent messages out to people telling them to rp here. Not like they'll look at the messages since their never here. Stupid procrastinators. Anywho....))
Jerry groaned and picked up a large knife from one of the kitchen (are they in a kitchen? they are now) counters. He started following Lucas, getting tired by each step he took. He finally grew tired of running after her reached the end of the town, breathing hard. He looked at the knife in his hand a threw it at Lucas' waist, hoping to hit him directly.
((sorry, it sucks. See, I had to try and post three times. you know why? First, I got like all of it done....then my computer dies. Rar. Then I started updating again and I accidently close out. So. This is the crud that you get. Sorry.))
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Post by raven on Dec 22, 2005 19:25:30 GMT -5
alright, I'm ganna put up my new...thing once I get something drawn and on my computer kay? okay))
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Post by marith on Dec 26, 2005 17:55:34 GMT -5
((Aha! I have created it! Now, i would update but I can't becuase i have to go to my grandad's bye! ))
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Post by Kimnas on Dec 27, 2005 16:36:29 GMT -5
((Yeah. Just...how did we leave the castle and get to running around the town? I thought Gerudo guards were crawling all over that place...hmm...I might be wrong...anywho)) Lucas' eyes raced as he saw every side alley, thinking of taking it to try and lose his pursuer, deciding against it every time. Finally, he decided to go for it. Just as he began to run however a sharp pain entered his side and caused him to stumble for a second.
Grabbing his side he brought himself back up to running level and began to push himself to start sprinting again. Knowing that his oppressor was short on his heals his adrenaline began to pump all the more...((Sorry it's a bit odd feeling...I'm in a weird mood post more lata))
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Post by raven on Dec 27, 2005 17:38:01 GMT -5
((Oh...we weren't? Oh, sorry....maybe we ran...like really...realllyy fast. Yea, sure...Sorry I can't post right now, I'm off to my grandpa's. Tomomorow!)
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Post by Kimnas on Jan 1, 2006 16:30:19 GMT -5
((Haha, no problem Raven. I hope you enjoy your G-Pa's house.)) Lucas rounded the of a house. He was in an alley...a smelly one. Anyhow, he did not notice the smell so much, considering his side was burning as if fifty bees had stung him in one place. He quickly looked inside his shirt to the cut. Puke came most of the way up his throat and he swiftly looked away. You see, Lucas had a weak stomach, and he couldn't stand blood.
Taking off his shirt and tying it around his waist, just on the cut, to add pressure, Lucas began to run to his right, in the direction of the castle. A noise! Lucas dashed into one of the open back doors of a house. He landed in a living room, with an old lady sitting in a rocking chair, knitting."Oh! Well, who might you be then, youngin'?" the elderly lady asked."Lucas, ma'am. But you are in great danger! There is a whole army here! We must leave this place at once!" Lucas replied in great haste."An army? Oh my! Well, let me just get a few things and we shall be off." "Ma'am, I fear we do not have enough time to even pack, we must run!" "Now sonny, we wouldn't get more than two days without some food and clothing, now give me a few seconds and we shall be off. Wait for me in the basement, please." 'The Basement?!' 'Doh, maybe this lady is a bit off her rocker...or maybe the Gerudo guards have already gotten to her! Maybe she's one of them! Or...'"Well, don't stand there gawking lad. Go downstairs!" the lady continued while she was hurrying about."Erm..alright." And Lucas rushed downstairs...((Can you guess who the elderly lady is? Heh heh heh... ))
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Post by Norelia on Jan 2, 2006 14:54:44 GMT -5
((mmmm......hmmm......ok no. not right now at least.))((ok, so where was I??)) (( oh, and I'll try not to take over anybody else anymore )) Zelda crept on through the castle grounds with the two guards with her. Actually, she didn't see the guards very often. Only glimpses as they weaved in and out through bushes and behind trees. She knew they wouldn't go far though and it was better that they where not all clumped together. Potter suddenly emerged infront of her and stopped her with his hand up.He looked at her and held up four fingers and then pointed ahead of them and a bit to the left. She knew by this that four enemies where close by and they where definitly to close to be talking. Potter moved a bit to the right and motioned her to follow. Just as she was about to follow after him, Zelda took one step and her dress caught under her foot. She fell forward, sprawling on the ground infront of her. Potter whipped around in astonishment, but he had no time to do much of anything else. The guards had heard and now they where crashing through the brush after the sound. Zelda looked up in fright and stumbled over her dress to try and get up again. Potter ran to her and pulled her the rest of the way up and dragged her after him into the woods. They could hear the crashing and yelling behind them, but they both knew this was not the right place to be trying to fight back. Toby immerged next to them pulling out his bow as he ran. They where coming up to a field that they would then have to cross to get to the stables. That was the only way to go now. Zelda ran and stumbled with Potter still pulling her on and finally they burst into the open fields.After they got a bit further into the field, Toby turned and knelt pulling out an arrow. He waited steadily until he saw the first moblin crash through. He aimed carefully and shot. The arrow soared and fell on it's target, knocking the moblin to the ground. Toby then yelled to Potter, got up, and started running again. As soon as Potter heard the yell, he dropped Zelda's arm, turned, pulled out his bow and arrow, and took a shot at the oncoming Moblins. The moblins where now taking more care since their friend had just been shot through, so they where ready for the next one as it came zipping through the air and it ended up glancing off one of their shields. Potter and Toby continued to do this as the three of them raced to the stables.Luckily the moblins that had found them did not have bows and arrows or they would have been in a lot more trouble then they where in. Zelda had kept running and felt useless since she did not have her bow with her. They where close to the stables now and she put her fingers to her mouth and let out a piercing whistle.(Maybe not the best thing to do when an army of moblins is around you, but since the guards where shouting already, hey, why not ) She was just about to reach the stables when she heard Potter shout."To the ground!!!!!!! To the ground!!!!" Zelda jumped to the ground just as an arrow whipped over her head"Where did that come from!! she thought in astonishment(( hope that ok. I was getting carried away and could have gone on more but I thought I probably shouldn't. You know. Someday I need to somehow meet up with you guys so I'm not like a totally seperate story. If that's ok with you guys of course I think I might actually be getting back into writing stuff again it's fun )) wow.....ya I kinda wrote a long one there....aha.
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Post by Kimnas on Jan 3, 2006 18:06:36 GMT -5
((Haha, nice. Only thing...who shot the arrow...hmmm...nice. Uhm, ya...well I'm planning on the elderly lady taking Lucas to the king who will be in hiding. Then I shall make a new character...maybe...))
Lucas hurried down the stairs, followed quickly by the elderly lady.
"Shhh," she said.
The woman then walked over to a bookcase and pressed it slightly in. It suddenly moved slightly to the side, just enough for a person to get through. She then barely slid through (because she had put on a few extra pounds since she had used this passage last). After she got through she turned and beckoned Lucas to come through, he did. Then she closed the bookcase behind her and they stopped and listened.
The sounds of footstpes and confused guards made Lucas' heart beat so loud and so fast, he feared he would have a heart attack. He honestly waited for the elderly lady to 'shush' him, thinking he was purposefully making those noises with his heart.
The guards eventually left and the lady told Lucas that they must hurry. She then began to rush down the underground path. All she had to light her way was something glowing that was in her basket...
(Sorry it's so odd...many breaks and such in between this post. Sorry.)
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Post by marith on Jan 3, 2006 21:33:09 GMT -5
((awesome!! I'm so hyped! I just had gum that has the same amount of caffeine as like coffee or something like that. So, any spelling mistakes or anything like that is totally to be blamed on the gum....the guuuummm. Oh yea, The basket is so cool, even if I'm lost...and yay! Your back, Zelda...Norelia! yay! yayayyayaya! XP))
((oh yea, this is raven....and I'm too lazy to put i all slanty.))
Marith had fallen asleep on the rump of the horse a few times, fading in and out of consciousness every time the horse would leap over a stump of log. When the horse came to a sudden stop, Marith came hurling forward into the hairy back of Mr. Sparks, as one of the other Moblins had referred to him as. She rubbed her eyes, and the front of her dress, and questioned the moblin what had happened. He didn't answer, instead, he motioned a dark looking elf over. The elf smirked and said quietly,'Now, now, don't be scared, we're just ganna take your basket and take you to...master." Suddenly, one of the other elves came up behind him and stated, "We're not to touch the basket, it's for Ganon only...you know that, Hilgerd." The elf then picked Marith up and placed her roughly on the ground, "Walk, girl. Up the hill." Finally, Marith took a good look at her surroundings. The area was dead, no sign on green leaves or grass, flowers or animals, anywhere. The dirt path that the group now walked on was muddy and filled with considerably deep puddles. Marith, engaged with the scenery, found herself tripping over a fallen tree and face down in a mud puddle. to add to her fall, her capturers began laughing behind her back. Once Hilgerd pulled on the chain that was attached to her waist, she was on her feet again. After traveling up the large hill, they reached one of the most demonic castles Marith had seen in her life. Fires circled it's walls, flickering brightly in the harsh wind. Underneath the rickety bridge that lead to it's door was a moat filled with sharp rocks and snapping creatures that Marith chose not to define. Beyond the doors, sounds of screaming and cracking whips was heard even before Marith reached the bridge. And beyond the bridge, into the doors, in the courtyard, was Marith's first sight at death. To her horror, she stepped upon the wrist of a headless man. First, her eyes shut, then vomit spewed from her mouth, then she fainted.
((....ew....I really hated that. Cuse I totally saw a picture of a head...seriously, just a head, and it's eyes were open and...rrrr.. I hate wars. ))
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Post by Kimnas on Jan 4, 2006 6:35:51 GMT -5
((Haha good job! Really, that was well written. Now...hmm...*ponders*...hmmm...on to the RP!))
Lucas' legs ached. He could've swore he had been walking at that gruesome fast paced walking where you are not sure whether you are walking or jogging for hours...and hours... Lucas was not about to let the older woman outdo him in a physical activity. He kept going though, despite his aching legs.
Finally, he could see a dim light at the end of the tunnel. He was almost there... When exited the dark passage which had been carrying them for quite a while, Lucas sighed. He was hoping for food, drink, comfort, not more travelling. The woman saw the look on his face and smiled.
"Almost there sonny." she said. Her voice giving a small ounce of comfort to Lucas' pains.
They then began on a path which had a pretty steep incline. (One could easily slide down it on a mattress...very quickly). Once they reached the top they entered a set of large doors and immediately a rush of air flew past Lucas' face. He closed his eyes...the sound of music, wind instruments, with such a warm feeling. He felt he could just fall over and sleep. A breath of excitement entered him, the type where you know you could jump a lot higher than normal and yell and dance around because you were so happy. He restrained himself however. He reopened his eyes to find the older woman all the way at the other side of the room, next to the king! The king had not noticed her yet but he was sure to do so soon.
The king, in all his splendor. 'What is he doing in a cave? Ah yes, the war, haha I almost forgot.' Lucas thought. The king was chatting and laughing with Fetlin, his most trusted friend, or so Lucas had heard. The king was laughing. There was a war going on above and he was laughing! 'Either that king is brave and wise so as to keep his people around him in good, high spirits, or he is a fool.' Lucas thought.
Fetlin motioned at the king to turn around and the king did so to see the elderly woman. The king's smile faded, fast. He immediately rose and Fetlin, the woman, the king, and two guards began to walk into a side room. The guards turned to guard the room.
Lucas rushed to try and get into the room and he approached it just as the king was about to shut the door. The guards stopped Lucas with two firm hands.
"No entry." the guards said.
Ignoring the guards, Lucas looked directly at the king's eyes and said...
"Sir please let me in. I wish to speak with you."
"I'm sorry son, you're not allowed." the king replied.
"Who's that?" the lady asked.
"It's the boy you were with." said the king.
"Ah, well, bring him in! You think I'd let some common ninny escort me? He is useful to us."
((Heh heh heh...now for Kimnas...))
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Post by Kimnas on Jan 4, 2006 6:52:20 GMT -5
(([Re-Enter Kimnas!] Okay, Kimnas is like...a ranger...a rouge...a loner...a dangerous loner...and...ya...here he comes... . By the way Here is his bio.)) The pounding of hooves woke Kimnas from his routine of brushing the horses at Lon Lon. His routine often lulled him to a sleep, not like a snoring sleep but a sleep in which you would carry on what you are doing. Perhaps he was thinking of war and adventure, perhaps of women and courting, perhaps of darkness and light...but anyhow, the hooves awoke him from this sleep and he quickly ran to a window of the horse stall he was in.
Dark horse. Dark riders. The sky had even grown dark and cloudly. A darknes before a storm, but yet there was no storm. Or at least, not one that most people referred to as a storm. Suddenly a massive bolt of lightning came out of the sky and struck the top of Hyrule Castle! Kimnas jumped. Then after a few seconds, he did not see a spark or a flame and he was reassured, but he did see a rider come flying out of The Market. This rider moved faster than any of the previous ones and he was indeed, much darker. ((Hmm...I wonder who that was?! Haha)).
Kimnas then saw a pair of slower riders. Both dark, of course, but one had a passenger, who was not dark. Not at all, rather she was...not moving. But her clothing inferred that she was not one of them, and if she wasn't moving, that meant trouble.
Kimnas turned and ran out of the stall and into his own personal stall where Typhas was. He saddled him quickly and launched himself up onto him, grabbing his sword, The Judgement, and his darkest cloak, Kimnas flew out of the stables and out of Lon Lon. He was a ways behind the last two riders but he could still see them.
He followed them for a whole day, or what seemed to be a day, for the sky was constantly cloudy and the air had a murky, evil feeling to it.
Suddenly he saw it. The castle. It did exist. '...uh oh...' Kimnas thought to himself. He saw the riders taking their prisoner into the castle.
He rode near it but he stayed out of arrow shooting distance. There was a small patch of trees nearby and so he hid in those, constantly watching the castle and any manner of movement that happened inside it. After about a half an hour of stilness in the castle, or at least he did not see anything move, Kimnas took some food and fed Typhas and himself. He then girded himself with all his weapons that he had brought. He was going to be ready for anything...((Whaddya think? *Listened to the soundtrack from POTC for this post.* Ahh...gotta love it. Heh heh.))
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