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Post by Nick on Jan 24, 2005 7:20:00 GMT -5
The Subway Station Chase A look over his shoulder to see if he was still chased Afraid that his reason for life might be erased He pushed through the crowd with much distress He was going so fast he had not time to confess
Swiftly he jumped across the tracks of the subway Hopefully giving him time to get away He ran up some stairs to try and get a better view For his love was somewhere, he knew!
There she was! Looking so scared Twenty feet he was, above her, to jump he only dared He then saw, his foe, who had spotted his love Without thinking, he jumped from above
Landing right next to her, he winced in pain "Come with me, I've no time to explain." She dropped her luggage and followed him She turned and jumped at his every whim
Running as if they had rehearsed it Considering their jobs, both of them were quite fit They finally reached a exit door and made it out Then they got in a car and sped off, without a doubt -Nick If you are sitting there with your jaw open and totally confused, do not fear. I shall explain more in upcoming poems
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Post by Alegna on Jan 24, 2005 12:05:10 GMT -5
wow nick- thats pretty cool... so come on, out with the next one!
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Post by Nick on Jan 24, 2005 13:24:21 GMT -5
The Hideout / Their Love They walked in the apartment, she was confused "Well, that was quite relaxing" she, to him, mused "Care to explain" she was obviously lost... "Wait one sec" he said, his gun onto the bed, he tossed.
"Okay, I know you quit and all and want nothing more But, it's here, and it's going for the core! It knows the members, it's back for blood! It's not just going to drag our names through mud..."
Ticked, isn't even the word that he would use The foe...lost it's love, and it was them, it accused "Does it have proof?" she asked him, scared "Well, it wasn't us, so it couldn't...I didn't think you cared."
"About you? You know I do." she said grasping his hand "Sorry, the way you left..." he said, looking at the broken glass and the sand. "That was the limitation of our love." she said to him. "...and you didn't want any..." you wanted it over the rim.
"I knew you know me...you can read my mind." "Yes...you'd think so...but what would I find." "Only the love for you, so deep in my heart." "I have the love too, it's why we can't stay apart."
"Then let's fight it together! C'mon, let's go!" "But if something'd happen to you...I just don't know." "I'll always love you...no matter what." "And I'm here with you, to heal every cut."
The two stood, prepared to face what came No longer seperate, but now, the same They fought as one, bled as one And they wouldn't give up, until they were done.
Loaded pistols sat on their hips as they searched Every known source they could find, from where they perched. Their hideout, was hidden well, untraceable Their identities were...unplacable.
Gone without a trace They were fighters...without a face Unstoppable and feared by evil men... Yet, a child would see them, every now and then... -Nick
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Post by Nick on Jan 24, 2005 13:28:27 GMT -5
Sorry if it's jumpy...I think I might've pushed it a little...a little forced...
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Post by Amry on Jan 24, 2005 19:39:57 GMT -5
Vewwy nice... I can't stand cliffhangers. Write more soon - I'm hanging on to every word!
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Post by Nick on Jan 26, 2005 14:18:17 GMT -5
lol Hahaha, sry. I would post more tonight but I have a limited time, sry pal...
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Post by Deorsa on Jan 26, 2005 14:53:58 GMT -5
Wow Nick. You amaze me more and more every day! I'm so impressed. Keep them poems a commin.
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Post by Nick on Jan 27, 2005 7:24:18 GMT -5
I can't right now...I'm not in the Danger of Love mode lol. If I wrote now...I would probably throw the story for a loop so I will wait till later, sorry. lol
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Post by Norelia on Jan 30, 2005 9:24:40 GMT -5
Good poems Nick! I think all of us want to hear the rest but take your time lol
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Post by Alegna on Feb 4, 2005 7:04:47 GMT -5
*still waiting in anticipation*
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Post by Norelia on Feb 4, 2005 8:19:20 GMT -5
Okay maybe this is a Bit Too Much Time!! I said take your time but I didn't think youd take a lifetime off! Hehe! Jkidding
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Post by Alegna on Feb 4, 2005 9:06:09 GMT -5
lol
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Post by Nick on Feb 21, 2005 6:45:07 GMT -5
I think I am going to write different poems about different people in different situations but all having the common factor of the danger of love, okay? Because I'm not sure I could continue that first one too much. I may try to in the future though, but not now. A Couple on the Beach The setting on a couple hand in hand Sitting together on the warm, course sand He was crying, so was she Both were looking across the sea
Their tears, not in vain, but for a reason Their love was older than just a season But his health was failing, his life growing dim And she had no life apart from loving him
Together they talked about what they should do Both knew the other could not start anew Should they just end, together...in love And meet once again, in the clouds, up above
The danger of love, when love takes its toll When one loves another, they are one soul To separate them, would be a crime But what to do, when one's reached their time
To love forever, both now, and then To tell your spouse you love them, again and again All you can do, is love with all you have And ask God to help each other along life's winding path
-Nick All I could come up with for now...hope it suffices.
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Post by Norelia on Feb 21, 2005 8:45:09 GMT -5
wow, that's really cool:) I like it good:) lol
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Post by Nick on Mar 28, 2005 7:38:59 GMT -5
I dunno whether I like it...lol
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